ODC Magazine

[Obscura]

Dude, not to be an asshole. . . ( coming from me )

But you need to run your stuff through a competent editor. I picked out ten spelling errors (in the first few pages that I clicked at random out of all three provided thus far) and ad layouts are a nightmare. I suggest that you look at other more successful magazines and see what they're doing and then tweak it to your own style. Though I stress that you don't go out and copy someone else otherwise you'll just wind up with a disappointing half assed production.

Good luck in your future endeavors.

 

[Ant]

I figured it out,it's the tranny. The bike is actually kinda cool

I think the person on the bike IS a tranny.

 

[SVDavey]

I think the thing on the bike might be his MOM!!!! It would explain why he gots so mad!

 

[vaara]

Interesting... the chick on the front page of the website is giving a salute.

 

[Papi-C]

I reviewed the site. IT was slow, looked like HTML 1.0 the Girls were beat and there were plenty of misspellings.

 

[V4]

merged from the KS into one thread....

 

[flying_hun]

You still fucked it up.

"Opinions are like assholes. Everyone has one, and they all smell like shit."

"Opinions are like assholes. Everyone has one, and nobody wants to hear them. "

 

[ODC5150]

Say, that's a nice lookin cover model if you like Pee Wee Herman in a bikini.

Hey cock sucker... watch it

 

[ODC5150]

You still fucked it up.

"Opinions are like assholes. Everyone has one, and they all smell like shit."

Ok tough guy..

 

[ODC5150]

If you're going to use that statement, at least use it correctly:

"Opinions are like assholes. Everyone's got one and they all stink."

Why thank you for that educational moment

 

[ODC5150]

Damn his load times are off the chain, the hook, etc. pay for a better host! You already skimped on the model

I know what only takes a second to load? Yeah...

 

[ODC5150]

That dude on the bike is creepier than my avatar

Yeah ... pretty much you like you.. with your cute mouth

 

[ODC5150]

my thoughts exactly. Ooh they need an email logo at the bottom that's a lame animated 3D .gif of a letter flying into the mailbox and the mailbox dancing around.

I am crush by your harsh mean words

crying now

 

[ODC5150]

Dude, really, that's a dude.

that's what they about your girlfriend...

 

[SVDavey]

Yeah ... pretty much you like you.. with your cute mouth

It's more of a sexy mouth (in a prison sort of way)

 

[ODC5150]

His pen0r is probably bigger than most of ours though

No actually I think all yours is much bigger than mine...

 

[ODC5150]

You spelled "The" wrong. Of course, then you'd have to change the name to OTC.

Thank you for that help ... how much do I owe you?

 

[SVDavey]

It's nice that you are taking the time to answer all of your fan mail personally

 

[ODC5150]

Don't let the door hit you in the ass on the way out. And remember: " Not every man is a fool, but every fool is a man." Ernie Montague said that.

No actually I am going to stay a while, I am getting the nahg this ... and I know know what BARF stand for ... Bay Area Retard Forum ... Hold I have some spare change for you ... there you go...

 

[SVDavey]

No actually I am going to stay a while, I am getting the nahg this ... and I know know what BARF stand for ... Bay Area Retard Forum ... Hold I have some spare change for you ... there you go...

Just be sure not to go full retard.